Very abstract, as you said, and artfully done :) it's beautiful. BRAVO!

great poem, i love the flow of it. also, i really like this line 'in the realization of a disillusioned mind' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

this is very good.keep up the work.

very nice! yes quite abstract, but abstract makes good poetry, more people can relate that way

i really love this

great worK!