Poor, poor baby. I hope you're alright now. This is beautiful

Well written. I can feel the emotion you put into this piece; very tragic.

I love this.

wow, so sad & so beautiful.

This is beautiful. I don't know if it's true, but if it's not you did a damn good job (pardon) putting the emotion into it. I have one like this on my profile ("The Dove"), and believe me when I say I understand. As a pure work of writing, it flows well and the imagery is good; I think I'll go read some more of your work. Again, I am very, very sorry...and there is a wonderful song I know:"Heaven holds the ones I loveI see your eyes smiling in the stars above...I feel your kiss in the rain..."~jewelofarabia~

This is beautiful. and so raw.

(i hope you're going to be okay.)