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clair-a-net 2008-03-18 ch 24,	abuseSo whats to happen to plum? How can she live a hlf life? How are they going to get away from that bad guy?
Lady Orchid 2008-03-16 ch 24, anon.	abuseOh my god! I'm so happy you finally updated! But with such sad chapters! I nearly started crying!! I hate to sound ungrateful, but FIX IT!! Make Plum his Beloved, just like it was supposed to happen! Make things right again! FIX THIS! Thanks again for the update. I'm glad to know that you haven't given up on this story. Happy writing!
flutegirlie88 2008-03-16 ch 24,	abuseHey - Wow! You have no idea how happy I am that you updated! This was one of my favorites from a couple years ago. When I saw that you updated, I was so excited. I look forward to reading what else you have in store.
Fall is past 2008-03-16 ch 23,	abuseplease, please, please do not let it stop here!! i don't even care if it's edited! AH! by the way, i love it, but i hate dante . . . obviously. anyways, please post the next chapter soon!
ItalianQT 2008-03-15 ch 23,	abuseThat cannot be good! Update soon! :-)
Jacoblover 2008-03-14 ch 23,	abusePlease tell me you're not going to leave it there. She can't die! shouts dramatically Sorry, i just hate sad endings. they're so depressing. update soon please!
Ck90 2008-03-14 ch 23,	abuseCan I just say that this sucks! Not the story don't get me wrong the story is great. But that stupid assholic good for nothing ,Mr, oh revenge is so good let me just mistreat her and kill the other guy, oh an while i'm at it i'll turn her into Frankestien! Good for nothing piece of I hope he is castrated, then have his fangs ripped out, later rip off his arms and then tie him to a tree and put him out in the sun and set him on fire. And event after that I would spit on his ahses and dance on top of them! I'll have more evil ways to kill him in the next review because seriously none of that seems quite satysfying! Let her at least have one heartbeat left please! Maybee he should be repeatedly stabbed while being tied to a tree and then be fed some blood to make him die even slower. But still not satysfying enough No Sir!
clair-a-net 2008-03-14 ch 23,	abuseWhat the heck. The bad guy is so not allowed to have her. He has to stop him before she dies. Please update soon. I love this story and am glad that you decided to update it again.
Regina Paige Moorlan 2008-03-13 ch 22,	abuseAh, this was the end I assume? I wish it hadn't ended so dismally morbid but then, such is life; it sort of brings back reality to a far-fetched plot. I like it, though as a sympathetic reader rather than a writer, I was hoping good would prevail. I know, my reviews are quite late (i know, I know, like two years) but I really like this and I would like to see it developed a bit more. Some things need to be more clear, like exactly what the process she AND her Beloved would go through because although it is explained, it is referred to so many times, things seem a bit confusing and contradictory. Also, setting transitions are a bit fuzzy and easy to read over without noticing and in effect making me if not others thoroughly confused. Other than that, though, it is promising and deserves a sequal! Write on!
Regina Paige Moorlan 2008-03-12 ch 5,	abuseI am thoroughly loving this! I have to say, the descriptions are a bit short lived but other than that, I think the dialog and plot are great. I have to say, about the cars, I just picture Aiden driving something like a black ferrari spider, a black dodge viper or something and Riley (?) driving a safer sudan my-dog-and-a-few-friends-can-come-too kind of car like a silver Acura RL or something. The prices sort of match as far as I understand it, the 2008 spider would be upwards of 100k and the 2008 viper would be upwards of 90k, while the 2008 RL would be about 50k-60k. All three sexy but the first two are more dangerous and sexy. Ha, I don't know why the cars mattered so much to me but... I'm sure I'll have more reviews coming your way very shortly
Regina Paige Moorlan 2008-03-12 ch 3,	abuseI just started reading this but I have to say, apart from one or two rough patches, it is entirely captivating my attention. I can't stop reading it!
Genato 2007-11-30 ch 22,	abusea good fic. please update.
ItalianQT 2007-11-12 ch 22,	abuseInteresting story so far...Plum needs to escape and get back to Aiden! Update soon! :-)
kit-kat94 2007-10-06 ch 22,	abuseUPDATE!
NinjAlt 2007-05-24 ch 22,	abuseThis story is really interesting. Any plans to update it?

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