Think you should update... It's very interesting... The way the uncle sighs about his sister in law makes me think he might of felt something for her (or maybe I've read too much Hamlet and am looking too much into things...) I wonder who is the wrong man she falls for...

Update!

Love IT ! update soon pls.

hmm... its been a while i didn't recognize this story so i had to re-read the first chapter... very suspenseful and slightly aggravating haha I don't know what happens next or whats going on, I definately hope you update sooner than your last post =) you have a great writing style, your vocabulary is awesome. I don't know anybody else who knows the meaning of juxtaposition ^_^ that was pretty awesome to see that albeit a little odd =) anyway! update soon!

oh i so got itthe uncle ment to kill only his brothercause he was in love with his brothers wifebut for some reason the wife was with the brother and got killed to the uncle is evil am i right?? huh huh ?

good story!!

Oh.I like this alot.You should continue this.It rocks! DWb

Wow, this is a really good story. I was surprised that I liked it actually. Its a little strange but most stories are. Nice little cliff hanger. I did see a few mistakes, a few missed spacebars but other than that I didn't see much wrong with it. I haven't found a story with a cliff hanger on the first chapter that i've actually wanted to follow up in a long time. =D update soon