This is pretty. I like the contrast between the beautiful colors of the petals and then the angry thorns. Wonderful job.

Keep writing,

:.:Nyoko-chan:.:

this is a great lil poem. very true and simple yet elegant. great word usage and nicely written! :)

This poem was good I understand what it's like to write poems when you're bored i write at least one per math period(the most boring class of the day)

I love flowers so much. The imagery of your poem made it so I could see them. Ahh ... I can't wait until spring shows itself. Flowers are spring, I've got to say.

Beautifully written.

Ahh, I love flowers! Anyways, I think this is a lovely poem on such a beautiful theme. I believe that poems not thought over carefully but made on quick impulse expresses a lot more of the poet's inner self as well as the poet's sincerity, and I can see that very well in this poem, so don't fret that it was a "quicky". I love how you related emotions and depicted it in every basic aspect of a flower. The manner seems so simple, but very detailed,and again, very expressive; not so many can achieve that. The organization is satisfactory, and on the whole, the poem's idea is complete. Nice composition!

Beautifully done!

Very nice. It's sweet.

hey, lacy here...

muchas gracias for the review i loved it...made my day(smiles) anyway this is awesome, the imagery, the description...it's all so perfect, and the smooth flow is really a work of art...job well done...

hm, I like the idea, but it doesn't really have the greatest rythm to it...then again, you said it was a quickie, so for that it's good.

Beautiful, awesome write.

I like this poem, because you took something simple like flowers and made it look like a symbol for life. Like "each thorn represents anger and resenment when they're mad," along with shrivels, and colors and petals

Wow! This is beautiful and sweet! Very symbolic, too.

I love how you did the each thing represents..it was very good! Geez Sara your writing gets better every time! I love this poem! Adios peep!

Aw, that's cute _ I've read so many sad poems lately, this was a really nice break P Not that sad poems are bad or anything...God knows I write too many myself XD Anyways, nice job! )

Jade

Ah very cute!1 lol