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Reviews For: You'll Never
e a t i n g . f l o w e r s 2006-03-02 . chapter 1
So sad! great usage of repetition. I liked this very much. Keep it up!
xWhit3StaRx 2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Aw...that's so sad =( I loved the way you used repetition and then tied it up at the end though! Great poem! Keep writing =)

Jad
Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-24 . chapter 1
great poem, i really love the ending. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
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