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Reviews For: When Death Knocked on My Door

eden is burning
2006-03-18
ch 1,
Wow... It's beautiful and individual. Generally a very cool poem.
Symon
2006-03-05
ch 1,
Wow... I enjoyed this new take on the the question of whether you'd choose never to die. And it's certainly an unique perspective. I really liked the structure on this one... though I really didn't like one of the rhymes ( got, and thought) I have to say that the over all greatness of this composition more than makes up for that little grammatical stumble. Rock on.
Mage Dudette
2006-02-25
ch 1,
wow. so powerful. i hope i could make that choice, although i doubt i would somehow. i'm glad she made that choice tho. go you! ^_^
Aneedegorarose
2006-02-25
ch 1,
Wow thats like only the second poem on here I've ever read and I'm glad I did. Very good... Beautifully written and great to read!
Drops of Jewpiter
2006-02-24
ch 1,
wow. abosoloutley amazing poem- one of the best that i have read on fiction press. it flows perfectly, the description is great, and the meaning is even better. awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
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