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| eden is burning 2006-03-18 ch 1, | Wow... It's beautiful and individual. Generally a very cool poem. |
| Symon 2006-03-05 ch 1, | Wow... I enjoyed this new take on the the question of whether you'd choose never to die. And it's certainly an unique perspective. I really liked the structure on this one... though I really didn't like one of the rhymes ( got, and thought) I have to say that the over all greatness of this composition more than makes up for that little grammatical stumble. Rock on. |
| Mage Dudette 2006-02-25 ch 1, | wow. so powerful. i hope i could make that choice, although i doubt i would somehow. i'm glad she made that choice tho. go you! ^_^ |
| Aneedegorarose 2006-02-25 ch 1, | Wow thats like only the second poem on here I've ever read and I'm glad I did. Very good... Beautifully written and great to read! |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-24 ch 1, | wow. abosoloutley amazing poem- one of the best that i have read on fiction press. it flows perfectly, the description is great, and the meaning is even better. awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |