I liked the poem. I thought the first half flowed very well. I sure hope you are feeling okay, though. If not, you should talk to a friend or something... or ME! You can talk to me. =D... Nice work! Keep it up!

Sterces

I like this. Great work! Write on!

~Anna~

great poem, i really love the first 3 lines. good job :)~drops of jewpiter~