Gosh, I wish I could describe things that magically. This poem was simply beautiful.

sallam, Linnet, this is that muslim girl who reviewed you like a year ago? i just wanted to mention, there's a muslim girl magazine that is in the works and the editor, Yasmine, is looking for dedicated writers. if you've got time on your hands, and think you can be up for it, email me and i can put you in contact with her because the magazine is kind of run over the net so it doesnt matter where you live. i write for it right now, and its really motivating.

if youre intersted, email me.

i liked the poem by the way. there's something really magical about the idea of Neverland so i love the different things people come out of from the book (or movie) its cool how you spun this...

Lovely! A good vocabulary, nicely flowing, all of that. Good job.