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| outsidersgirl 2007-10-28 ch 1,   | this is good |
| i loost speeling beas 2007-06-21 ch 3, | aw, why did u stop |
| spydercrystal 2006-04-18 ch 2, | If I'm not mistaken, it's illegal for intimate relations to occur between an adult and a minor. If Mitch was nineteen and Carly was seventeen, they could have a serious legal problem on their hands. You could put that in for more intrigue. |
| a-song-light 2006-03-09 ch 3, | i love this story i really do but i miss the updates its an awesome story but please please update if your still alive... |