story's going good so far! keep up the good work

this is good

aw, why did u stop

If I'm not mistaken, it's illegal for intimate relations to occur between an adult and a minor. If Mitch was nineteen and Carly was seventeen, they could have a serious legal problem on their hands. You could put that in for more intrigue.

i love this story i really do but i miss the updates its an awesome story but please please update if your still alive...