I like how old-school it sounds

Great idea for a poem! I loved reading this! 'My labourers hath not bit on their verve, And repress all the life I defend!' This is just so... cool... ^^

Btw, thanks for your reviews, I'm glad I understood at least something of your french poem, being german I often don't get the point when I read things in foreign languages. (And yes, that does include english, I'm not so good at it) I envy you that you can write poetry in french, it's a beautiful language.

oh well, I became curious and looked further, this one is good, I like it, the line, " and bile simmers in my gall," is great. DC

very nice word choice...keep it up you definately seem to be in the good grace of the muses MLF

Great poem :D Its very neat, cool idea!