hah, nice epilogue.it really ended it well

maybe finishing another story, gasp.hah

ah, interesting endvery clever, it ties back.

well this was an enjoyable story, i really liked itthough most things dont so easily come back together, but that would be nice

ah short, but i like itit isnt on and on, just to the point

i like the poetic peace about time

and i just realized what you were hinting at, he only has power over cagallivery clever, very clever.cause i was thinking, why dont they just both run..hm...

awfully sad, but maybe the next chapter will bring some light

hopefully

well that is a twistsomeone better...stop him?

i truly hope the sickness is not fataland what a clever idea

great cliff hangerbut you leave here??ahh

well anyhow, i cant wait to find out what happens

ahwell, i will be interested to see how they reach these endings

ground breaker for the storynot overly predicatble either, i really wouldnt have guessedbut there were clues

but it is wonderful. but i still feel really sorry for the poor girl

Very interesting. I was wondering if they are in midevil times or not. But great chapter..

Love,Cama

its interesting

but i dont see the tie with Beatrice, does that mean every single person she meant was to betray her.

aw, poor kid.

and i am a bit foggy still, Lucien is in this without betraying her?

hah, torturesounds kind of lovely actually, reminds me of beauty and the beast the teapot and belle

interesting twists

(dont say its crap, because it is not)

yay.

i am not losing my mind

we

aw. sad ending

but i feel hopeful in this.

though i am lost, Skye isnt dead...

This was another good chapter. I can really see your writing improve as you go.

Keep up the great work.

Love,Cama