"baptizing the morning" delicious

This is a wonderfully thoughtful poem.

Love hangover? Guilt? This poem seems quite sad to me. When do people sing Latin? In church, I suppose. The shower, the baptismal cleansing in the bathroom, seems to offer something to redeem the sad feeling of a wonderful night being over.

Write a sequel to the last line...

**. you are very talented.

Wow, this is a really good piece of work, I really enjoyed reading it, the word play is cool and I really got into it!

Keep writing!

Alan.

I love the way you play with words, imbuing such a different meaning. Great work.

...different. i want to read more.

absolutely beautiful.

i just love this! beautifully detailed. great job! and i love the title. lovely!

Whoa, love those last lines.

wow so beautiful, it flows so well. it's like you came up with this in the shower. nice work!