Wow. Absolutely amazing. Powerful imagery, shocking and so apt to portray the pain of heartbreak. Greatly done.

Like always, I loved it!!

This piece, I think, is one that a lot of people can relate to... Well, I can relate to it at least. I love the imagery of the first stanza. Awesome job.

“such a large heart for such a small girl”; they say:-that is a way to break out of being cliche, my friend.

ah, i like it.they do use black gloves, i wonder why not white sometimes.it is like death is a dark thing, we have to use this black gloves. silly, silly.

hmm..not qite sure i understood this, but hey, poetry isnt about understanding, its about feeling and emotion. keep writing though.

this is incredible. i love the second stanza 'they found you amongst the sea of black you created' that tells so much. beautiful poem

For some reason, I didn't really like the beginning. I don't know why. But the rest of the poem was perfect. It's almost whimsical, a shocking contrast to the subject matter.