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| Wogan May 2006-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseThis sounds like Man's unguided search for truth. Running through a constant, yet ever-changing world, never realising the answer lies within. I like it. |
| NO LONGER USING 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abusewow that's so beautiful...i love this poem |
| the.pink.life 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseThis is an interesting poem. I'm assuming there's some metaphor to this, but I'm not exactly sure what it is. Small nitpick: I think you meant it's (like it is) in the 4th line. (I'm such a grammar freak sometimes, it's scary.) I'm also not sure what the faces at the end are referring to. Work on your writing. It'll get better. Keep writing! :) |