That's sucha good poem really. truly fantastic! "And the cheat that will scratch me and spitAnd drive me away. All tenderness fadedInto forgotten feelings of regret and time wasted." Favourite part of it. I'm gonna shut up and read some more now!Ava

Wow, I really like it. I read the summary and I was like "omg! totally relates to me!" lol. I was in the same kind of situation last year when I was 17, lol. Anyways, really nicely done. I like the last line :)

Keep writing,

~Rhia