The ending was incredible and bluntness quite unforeseen. The images you fabricated were awesomely hooking and sure of themselves. These pictures led the reader to a sudden halt - the ending with its sudden forthrightness and you release a gasp. I think of it as a mixed media painting, one that you hadn't realized was indeed mixed until you met the clashing point - as if the artist added a quick dab of conspicuous acrylic on watercolor. It's craftily done.