I love this poem, I read it on your proflie overon ff.net adn it's just wonderful. It perfectly captures that sense of loss when you miss someone. Wonderful!Ava

this really touched me. i get to see my best friend maybe once a year, and no matter how many friends or people i'm surrounded with, the absence of that one voice is always noticable in the din. -Ash

Short, but incapable of being any more lengthier - it's flawless as it is. I can't find the word I'm searching for to describe it. It's sharp in a way, yet so mellow as well. It flows, lasting only a breath, and completes in a weary satisfaction.