O_O interesting! Lol! Maybe the rating could have been lowered, but I wouldn't now because this website deletes stories for no reason sometimes.

i havent read something like this in a long while
it's a poetic wonder filled with sweet passion
please write more yuri
i like ^^
what more need i say?

I love it! i happen to think you can write really well I have read alot of poetry about encested love and yours is most likly the best can wait to here another one from you!