Here comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say it's all right. Little darling, it's been a long cold lonely winter, little darling, it feels like years since it's been here. Here comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say, IT'S ALL RIGHT.

...Anyways.

"just a pill more than the suggested dose" i am so in love with that line, delicatly gripping and just so, so right.

~* noelle

Good stuff. I like the paragraph alignment of the poem.

sadistic. what prompted you to write this?

oh god. this was perfection. "just a pill more than the suggested dose" i loved that detail. damn good job. *applauds*

The way it flows reminds me of a song. Good poem.

~Leeona Trance

Gripping.