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| hey maria 2006-03-06 ch 1,  | abuseHere comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say it's all right. Little darling, it's been a long cold lonely winter, little darling, it feels like years since it's been here. Here comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say, IT'S ALL RIGHT. ...Anyways. |
| poetic abortion 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuse"just a pill more than the suggested dose" i am so in love with that line, delicatly gripping and just so, so right. ~* noelle |
| Infinity Plus One 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseGood stuff. I like the paragraph alignment of the poem. |
| Khali Draegan 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abusesadistic. what prompted you to write this? |
| insomnia in dreamland 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseoh god. this was perfection. "just a pill more than the suggested dose" i loved that detail. damn good job. *applauds* |
| Leeona Trance 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseThe way it flows reminds me of a song. Good poem. ~Leeona Trance |
| chaos called creation 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseGripping. |