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hey maria
2006-03-06
ch 1,
abuseHere comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say it's all right. Little darling, it's been a long cold lonely winter, little darling, it feels like years since it's been here. Here comes the sun, doo doo doo doo, here comes the sun, I say, IT'S ALL RIGHT.

...Anyways.
poetic abortion
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuse"just a pill more than the suggested dose" i am so in love with that line, delicatly gripping and just so, so right.

~* noelle
Infinity Plus One
2006-02-26
ch 1,
abuseGood stuff. I like the paragraph alignment of the poem.
Khali Draegan
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abusesadistic. what prompted you to write this?
insomnia in dreamland
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abuseoh god. this was perfection. "just a pill more than the suggested dose" i loved that detail. damn good job. *applauds*
Leeona Trance
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abuseThe way it flows reminds me of a song. Good poem.

~Leeona Trance
chaos called creation
2006-02-25
ch 1,
abuseGripping.
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