it's great..but i'm a bit confused.In your second chapter i'm not really sure who's thinking and who is not. But I sort of figured out, it's a bit confusing, but it's great!

Okay, your chapters need to be WAY longer. I long for more! I think he is so sweet, but he screwed up and he's a jackass at the same time.

eek! i uploaded a diff file..im so sorry! will redo..once i figure out how to get rid of this! ahh!

Ha! just like my poem...kinda

btw, this is first chapter. could not think of what else to say. will be continued. no worries.

hey i liked this ^_^ thanks alot for your review ^_^ ^_^ ^_^

you made me happy...^.^ (can't you tell?)