 Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-28 . chapter 1That's kind of strong to call yourself a witchy **. Hm. Oh well, love makes even the most normal of man (or woman) out of their mind. |
 A. J. Krautwurst 2006-10-02 . chapter 1you completely pinned down the alter-ego i think every adolescent girl has at some point. it screams to come out sometimes. 'silk breath.' what a completely awesome image. |
 laughter at the funeral 2006-06-17 . chapter 1witchy **...i think there's a witchy ** in everyone of us...it's just waiting to come out...and i really commend you for knowing exactly when to italicize...
truly yours... |
 Coloured Raindrops 2006-02-27 . chapter 1I love it. I love you. |
 star blanket river child 2006-02-27 . chapter 1Wow... I love it.
"But you see, it was this silly infatuation, This ridiculous sudden lust that ruined everything." So easy to relate to. You put it perfectly.
"And even though I said I’d forget this feeling, And even though I don’t think I like you like that anymore, I think I can guiltlessly flirt with you." Another thing that I can really relate to... I love how you take the words right out of my mouth but you say them so much prettier than I could have ever managed.
Beautiful work. Never stop writing. |
 Respect Is Sexy 2006-02-26 . chapter 1Um. Wh00t for witchy whores... certainly Kendra can probably identify >. |
 boys kiss girls 2006-02-25 . chapter 1Oh... harsh! A lot of people can relate to this. Good job. |