Interesting poem. Quite meaningful and figurative.

Wow love it. I think I completly get it, although I cant really explain it. (no I'm not just covering up that I don't get it here.) I love the guitar part..Are you a fan of Francesca Lia Block? From your stories you sound like her...

i just wanted to say...i love you.

This is really sinister (I don't know whether that was your intention) - and I like the format. I think the questions are really effective. I like it.

oh my, i think i'm in love with your poetry. this one was. . . heh, i don't have words for it. the guitar, gosh! the second verse had me all eep-ish. you stated it so bluntly. i could almost imagine it. awesome work and y'know, i love you for reviewing. you made my day :) thanks a bunch and i'm off to read more by you. awesome :)

I loved the guitar part. Nice use of words.

Awesome format!

I also really love the guitar part. So clever. The comparison of a girl to a guitar... wow. It's just awesome. I also love the curious fingers- curious is such a great word and it's amazing tied with fingers.

"Why yes dear, I’m bleeding in my veins." I love that line for some reason. Has a lot of power.

As always, I love it. Keep it up.

Where did your beautiful use of metaphors and wonderful imagery go?It's all becoming so angsty.

I love the guitar part. lovely ending