...odd. not bad. just... extremely odd.

keep on writing ~~MWRenaee-:|:-

I like half of it. I like the idea you have with the zombies and the way alot of this sounds, but I don't know, some of this doesn't flow well and you should smooth it our more. Other wise, great idea something differant.

Wow. Well written, I like the ending, the hesitancey of it. Well written indeed

Oh wow! This is really cool! I can totally hear this as I read it. I really want to hear it with music!

~dragonzz~

holy shizz. scared the crap outta me O_Onice work dude.

frightful, but well written. i'd like to hear this with music...

Wow! This sounds really kewl! Sorry, I'm interested in strange stuff like this. I would love to hear it put to music!

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