Well, I'll get the worst part over with first. There were repetitive spelling mistakes throughout the whole story. If you just go over the story and fix them up, it would make this story all the more better.

Okay bad parts over with!

I absolutely loved this story. The orginality really made this story so much better than any of the cliched stories I could have read. How all of the characters connected with each other was a nice touch (sometimes they aren't all intertwined). Just overall it was a great interesting story. I'm so happy that I found this story and I got out of my reading slump. I would love to see what everyone looks like too. Web of Lies is a definite favorite.

okay- firts of all- :) i want to know ( really really badly) what happened to caysee, and the rest of the group- including denny and his family :). Okay now that, that issue is off my chest i want to tell you something- i am a a reader- read day and night and it is rare to find a peice that whips my up in such a frenzy. Shoot i even put in my facebook thingy that i couldnt deal with the tension of not knowing what was going to happen. You h\have ALOT of talent - so much. I seriously think you should actually publish this. It is great :) And if you decide to publish it, then be nice and say what happened to All the mian characters wiil yah ? :)- i am lucky because youll tell me right? right? please?

not even halfway through but I really like this!!

i have a lot of sympathy for Lynne...

i think its time to write another story about a future "group" or the previous group the formidable five

I just finished reading this story, and I absolutley loved it. It even made me cry, which is something not many can do, I didn't want it to end, it was just absolutley brilliant.

Wow, that was just, wow. I absolutely loved this story. It was rather interesting. I loved how you actually gave hints about the plot instead of jsut throwing things in there. Very well planned. (:

Um, I am trying to think of things to make the story better, and really can't. So, again, I must say well done.

I am rather happy with the ending and am glad it's not too happy...


A very, very good read.

this story is in my faves!

wow, I liked your story!!
the scene where people were going to burn the group down was pretty scary and it only reminds me that people mostly don't change throughout the time. like they were ready to burn "witches" :)

Well hi there =o
I finally finished reading this awesome fic, it took me 3 good days. I usually don't read such long fics, because after a while it gets boring, but I have to admit I haven't been bored once when reading your fic. The plot is very interesting, and I love the characters (mostly Denny =p).
So yeah, congratulations for coming up with such an awesome fic, and also a huge thanks for letting me read it

this was a beautiful story. well thought out and crafted. Love never fails ...truly

Nice story. Well thought out too.
I have to admit, I've seen your story on so many favorites, but I was always hesitant to read it. I don't even remember why anymore.
Your story was really good. I'm dying to read more from you!

Ah Lynne was such and idiot x'D. But I love the ending tho

Okay, I'm satisfied now. Lol. Once again, awesome job. :D

Wow. The ending really surprised me. I was going back and forth on whether or not the group would die. The townspeople are crazy though. Killing just like that... I'm really curious about Anthony and Eva though, not sure why. But still, your story was awesome. Great job :D

Aw, that's so cute! Denny and Lynne finally together :)