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| Wolf Ravensoul 2007-07-25 ch 1, | I enjoyed the way that poem flowed. A lot of helpless frustration in there. The damsel has my pity. You have a lovely way with words. Keep this up. TTFN. Cheers Wolf |
| Foreverswimming 2007-01-21 ch 1, | I really liked this. I think the meaning is that we sometimes think that others are always fooling and messing with us when really we are binding ourselves to them. We could escape yet we refuse to. Well, that's how I see it at least. |
| The Mumbling Sage 2007-01-11 ch 1, | Interesting choice of comparisons, and one that is very accurate the way you portray it. I like your rhyme and meter as well. |
| sifer 2006-05-09 ch 1, | Wow Marina i realy like this one it shows everything in alittle of you're situation you know?...lol,BBF and eternity-Wyatt |
| E.S. Lundgren 2006-02-25 ch 1, | i really like this plot for a poem, it's really creative, and i also like how great you did ABABAB rhymthing. great ending too. bravo. |