Where ever have you gone? I come each day and there is no new chapter. I am sad... hehe. Hurry up please!! I can't wait to see how the story unfolds. ^_^

~Static Wolf

I am glad she decided to live life her way. Everyone should put themselves first, in everything. Yea it is good to love someone else but there is only so much that they can do for you. But again I applaud you on your stories. I am thinking about hiding you in my closet and keeping you for my own reading enjoyment... joke. Well on with the story! ^_^

~Static Wolf

Talking is good! lol. Update soon!

Here you go with your cliff hangers again... you pick the worst part in the world to leave. But I guess that is what keeps us readers coming... hehe. Well again I applaud your writing abilities and I CAN'T wait for more!! Please hurry!! ^_^~Static Wolf

So much dialogue! That's okay, I'm the same way.

M, don't forget to give the readers some details about the surroundings and the like. This story is a great read.

::sigh:: why cant Will be an ** so that she could just leave him and go with Garret? i love this fic... demon good?? he better be on a tight leash lol

Nik

he scares her? What a nice reason, though I do see why. Now this Damien intrigues me... where will it go with him? Guess I have to wait and see! lol.

The transition from the demon being evil to being friendly was a little sudden. But, keep those updates coming! I am interested to see how this story progresses.

ah soo good.. i love the line "if you want to whip them out and measure go ahead"! lmao that was amazing haha is this part new? idk i dont really remember a demon joining them but everythime i think of your story im like cabin and sex... hahaha but that is def later on lol post more soon!

Nik

heheh I like Damien~ He's very ... interesting XD Update soon~

poor rachel. I wouldn't want to be there with two guys about to measure themselves to see who wins... scary.

Hmm... that hole that Rachel has her head in must be very nice because she shoudln't care if Garret comes. Does she really want to die!Just be like they are going to sacrifice me and you MIGHT have a chance if you save me. LOl.

Hahah I love that last bit ... XD Gotta love Garret~

Update soon ^^

Again, these four chapters were good and I am interested to see how this story progresses- I never read the original but this version is good so far.

(we can eat and drink things other then blood)

Having that explained in greater detail would be wonderful!

ah i hate cliffhangers! hehe it was a cute one though... great stuff! those poor girls.. gr i wish i had an exciting life like this lol..

Nik