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Reviews For: Reflections on Tintypes
the naked civil servant 2007-08-21 . chapter 2
oh god
cant explain how much this resonated
so clear and evocative
the choppiness of the last stanza like a conveyor belt
i Love it..
love that's leaving 2007-03-02 . chapter 3
jesus, I can really relate to this. I'm sorry, but it has to go on my favorites.

Peace and Love

~> Lifed
breezy nostrils 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
i like the innocent voice in this one. nice work.
goddessofmoondreams 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
this was so sad but honest. keep writing.
Atelophobia 2006-05-20 . chapter 2
Both beautifully well-written poems. (: The first one was so sad! & for the second I loved the lines "I can't seem to shake the feeling/That selfishness gets you farther." Well done. (:
in a jar pk 2006-05-01 . chapter 2
this was my favrit out of the two...yet both were excellently written.
botmasta 2006-04-15 . chapter 2
Perfect emotion-capturing. Format helps.
the naked civil servant 2006-03-01 . chapter 1
oh... so sad. beautifully worded, with that sudden drop of realization at the end. wonderful.
insomnia in dreamland 2006-02-26 . chapter 1
i loved this. it was so bitter and sad and just so truthful. i loved the irony in it too. this was perfect. *faves*
Evelyn Tan 2006-02-26 . chapter 1
O.O Did it really happen? =( That's so sad, and the way you put it really did bring out the emotions well.
Princess-anna57 2006-02-25 . chapter 1
*wipes a tear away* that's so sad! :(

Well written poem! Really conveys emotion well! Write on; you have talent!

~Anna~
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