Wow, this looks like it's going be a great story...and it looks to long enough to keep me busy for a few minutes or so. ;)

First off, I really love the IM conversation. Sometimes you see really fake ones in stories, but these were very realistic, right down to the display names. I also really like the protagonist's attitude, makes things interesting.

One thing though, is Melissa indeed her mom? Unless the customs are different in England it seems kind of odd for her to be calling her mom by her first name. Also, the argument seems just a little bit much to me. Sometimes with drama like that, less is more. Just a thought. :)

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Wow, I read the behemoth in one go. That was fun! I liked all the characters, and I'm interested to see how the Ryan/Nate situation goes. While I like Nate, I'm still finding myself rooting for Ryan. I hope you start work on the sequel soon. :)

I've just read the entire story in the last day and I absoloutely fell in love with it. It was just amazing, all the characters, the twists, the love interests, the conflict, the ending. The ending!! I really hope you're writing a sequel let me know if you are..I will definetly read it. So please keep up the good writing and yeah, you're an amazing writer!

If your plannin to finish the story there i will personally come round nad murder you! only kidding but update soo ur teasing me with this Ryan thing

great story. I read the whole thing. i hope you make a sequel.

well i have to say that i am completely all for Ryan and Blair to get together...i like ryan:) ...i love what you have created and cannot wait for an update. cheers.

Penultimate chapter? No! I have really enjoyed reading this.

Looking forward to the rest,

*Books4mE*

Ok maybe not so good because Blair is all confused now but I do want ehr and Ryan to get together so much even though I know it'l be so bad for Nate and Ryans relationship.

OMG I love you. Ryan and Blair are liking each other OMG YAY. GOnna read the next chapter now!

oh temper temper.
infuriated Blair and angry Melissa.
potential hook-up with Ryan?
YAY!
bcoz as much as blair and nate sound nice together,
blair and ryan sound hot together.
see the diff?
nice...hot...difference.
but ignore my suggestion.
i'm not writing it, you are.
so good luck

izzie

yay
new update
love this chapter...jeez make melissa leave already! i hate her...what an evil, unfit mother!

oh my gosh.
she really is pregnant.
i had my suspicions when she called up...but i didn't think it was actually going to happen!
and as much as lauren and samantha seem like an excellent bunch, blair should so stay in california.
and uh...don't know if you noticed, but the email addresses didn't turn up in some of the earlier chapters.
favourite character: blair and ryan
least favourite: ashley and tara
levi and blake remind me of Janis and Damien from Mean Girls.
love that movie...this kind of reminds me of Mean Girls in a way..
well...not the preppy kind of way..the good kind of non-preppy way.
so anyways..love the story.
good work, loved it (mentioned that a few times by now)

izzie

awesome
well what ive read of it!

Oh poor Blair. I hate Melissa she's such an idiot. So is she going to have to go home or what? Update soon!

God whats happened? Update soon and I know I say this every time but Blair and Ryan just think about it, it seems so perfect in my eyes!