You write STRONGLY! I could virtually feel your power coming from the peom! you are a really good poet!
Narq.

i don't really care for the first line but the rest is wonderful.

I really loved this poem. I had a situation in my life where a friend betrayed me and now we're not friends, and I can definitely relate to the emotions in this poem. Very good.

Aw hinhin! Go you! Way to get things off your chest! And you know that even though she turned out the ** that she did, the rest of us are always always always there for you! We love you! :D