 JadeD0ne 2008-01-28 . chapter 1I never thought that anyone could make cheating seem ok. but you have made it seem a little less terrible. You were wrong about the poem it was about a compeditive swimmer going back to the pool after being away for years. added to favs |
 MidnightLight 2007-05-19 . chapter 1So romantic, and yet so dark... it's amazing. |
 Katybuckets 2006-12-27 . chapter 1nice. There's a pulse to the poem I really enjoyed. |
 Kartoffel on Canvas 2006-02-26 . chapter 1i feel like im being told an important secret noone else is supposed to hear. great work! |
 Obsidian Eyes 2006-02-26 . chapter 1That was so good! Lovely style and tone, write on-
Obsidian Eyes |
 darknesslivesinu 2006-02-26 . chapter 1Mm, I feel like I'm experincing it. Nice imagenary.
"My pule"
I believe you left the s out. |