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| painted eyes 2008-07-08 ch 1,  | abuse'Silence falls...' WOW! That line really hit home. I can not see anything wrong with this. I like the name of the title. Keep up the good work! |
| MidnightLight 2007-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThat is amazing, too. So angsty. |
| Katybuckets 2006-12-27 ch 1, | abuseA little cliche as far as poetry goes (i.e..Razor Blades, Blood, Death). You have a nice ear for rhythm though. I'd say try something figurative, not "happy" persay, but not explicit. |
| Lucas 2006-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseSomehow i don't remember this one ;-) can someone say emo? lol j/k j/k it goes together really well me likey :-)-Lucas |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusewow- great poem. i don't think i've ever seen an 'angsty' poem in so few words, but you portray it greatly. there's also a gret flow to it- i can hear a beat. good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| insomnia in dreamland 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseaww, i loved this. i loved at the end how the words rhymed, it was a nice closing to this poem. i love the bitter simplicity in it. good job. |