 xXxBlackKatxXx 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Oh.. wow. This is REALLY good. Very true in all it says, yet still rhymes. I love it.
-Jane |
 xWhit3StaRx 2006-02-26 . chapter 1Hm seems like a pretty realistic dilemma =P Nice job! Keep writing! =)
Jade |
 Lana Mira Beth 2006-02-26 . chapter 1A-yay! It's posted! Great job here, I really like this one. Especially the ending, although, I enjoy anything expressing uncertainty and hopelessness! :) |
 emeraude-irlandais 2006-02-26 . chapter 1>< Thanks for the advice. xD It almost sounded like you really had experienced having a combination of jealous old friends and superficial new ones...which I'm experiencing right now. Not asking for advice, though. Definetely not. Other wise, good not-too-cheesy rhyming.`~bella~` |
 Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-26 . chapter 1great poem- it really does describe high school experience. good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |