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| Bunnie09 2006-08-17 ch 1,  | abuseSo sad...I've often considered suicide. I never had the guts, though. Nice work! I love the rhyming that you used! Natacia |
| woodstock1969 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseThat's so sad! I really like how sometimes the lines rhyme, and sometimes they don't. It adds a bit of intrigue. |
| Lana Mira Beth 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice, sad, and...nice. Loss for words...meh. Depressing, but good. I agree with Drops of Jewpiter, 'after the light has abandoned me to die'is a nice line. :) |
| whatshername665 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusereally good. seems like everyone is depressed to day, including me. haha.anyway good job. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusegreat poem- angsty but still good. i love the line 'after the light has abandoned me to die'~dropsofjewpiter~ |
| Torn Silver Moon 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, this one is really good too. Disturbing, but good. Continue! |
| gdy 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I like it a lot, and I think the rhymes are great. In fact, they may be what made it. Keep it up. |