I understand that this is just a prologue, but you do leave a LOT open. Was there any warning about the assasin? Her father seemed to know what was happening. What about her mother? Was her father in a career that was dangerous? Does this story take place in a time of war? Well, you know how I love questions, right? :) Other then being extremely mysterious, very good! There were very few grammatical errors, and you have the beginings of an intriuging story! Talk to you later.

Well done! I like this chapter! I like how each character has a personality and everyone is there for some reason or another instead of having random characters thrown in for no reason. Good descriptions too.

Just so everyone who reads the reviews, I did not (below) review myself, that was my friend, she wanted to review my story but I forgot I was logged in and so it now looks like I reviewed myself, I did not. Just so everone knows.

OMG i love this story! ya you! i give it it 4 marshmellows out of 5!