people should not worry about age... i think, just enjoy the time you have~ good poem

keep writing!

great poem. i really love the last two lines and the line 'mummy's broken again' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

I wonder if this is what my mother thinks...very well done.

Wow. This is depressing. I love how you play with the words... wonderful! I would not know how it is to be forty (something) because I am only fourteen, and yet this is sad...