Reviews for Just a little more decorum

Reviews For: Just a little more decorum

AllyCred 2006-02-28 ch 1,	abusevery nice, i like it, the description is really good, well done!
Calligrapher of Hearts 2006-02-28 ch 1,	abuseAww, Unca. That was amazingly heartfelt. I know how it feels to want to cling to the memory of a grandparent badly. Absolutely beautiful stuff. xhXix
chaos called creation 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuseI think this poem has the best flow out of all your works.
Faithless Juliet 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is very mellow, slightly melodramatic but the flow of this was so calming (I kept getting the feeling of being on a boat - like each verse was a wave). This is really sweet to write a poem for your granddad (tell him I said happy birthday and rock on) I always tell strangers happy birthday (it‘s the only courteous thing to do.) no sleepwhen you're in focus,reminding me of thechildhood I dropped-I really like that! Like I always find it weird how people remember me when I was younger even if I don’t remember it. Like when your little and you just say the cutest (if not embarrassing things) and family always talk about it at get-togethers and such and you laugh along but don’t really get the full joke. It made me think of that. And childhood is dropped. There’s nothing subtle about growing up, it just happens. I’ve been toying with the idea recently about the finality of childhood (like your a kid once, but an adult for the rest of your life) the concept has worked it’s way into a few pieces, but it hasn’t really stuck anywhere yet. This is really sweet (different from your others) more organic maybe - it’s nice that you keep in touch with family, especially older generations. I only have one grandparent left and I haven’t seen him in years (not that he‘s seen me either) but that’s my family for you, nobody gives an inch unless someone else gives a mile. Keep up the good work. Much love,Juliet.
are you from mejico 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuseIt seems to go fast. I guess that's cause there's short lines? I like it.
White Tea and Ginger 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuseI like this, the reptition is a great little subtle bit to give the peice true flair.
Aquafied 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuserocking myself to a stateof awake (no sleepwhen you're in focus,- it chokes me up a little bit, but enough choking for today i am awed in the relevance to your grandfathers birthday or if that was just a part of the day it reminds me of crying on the phone (but i dont do that anymore.)
bittersweet suicide 2006-02-26 ch 1, anon.	abusethanks for the review.landscapes of imagination I love that line very nice. great work keep writing
breezy nostrils 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abusehaha i thought it was about that guy at first, but as i read your a/n, it is actually about your grandad. anyway, i thought it was sweet, and well written. keep on going!
sunday night sky 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abuse'landscapes of imagination' beautiful imagery! great piece. lovely!
mizu no kokoro 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abusewow, i liked the tone, thought provoking at parts, wonderful way to celebrate a birthday^^ keep writing!
xHannahx 2006-02-26 ch 1,	abusewow, this is really nice. i dont really know what it is that makes me like it, but i do :) gd job, Han.

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