Even though you stole the idea from me (:P!), your version is still better :)x

okay... omg... the first thing that went through my head was... wow, I won't give you a crappy comment like I give most people. This is honestly really good! The metaphor!! It's true, there's the disguise on the outside who determines the person that you are, physically and tehen there's the person inside which determines what type of person you are, morally. Then there's the other dimension that you applied... the other layer... make-up. The ultmiate deciet, to cover up your natural beauty is a lie to yourself on the inside ANd the outside. So ya, I really found the topic of this intriguing, enriching, and original! And for that, this goes into my favorites. WEll.. anyways.. .back on topic.

My favorites (the norm)... I loved the words that you used! just adored them!! Seeped... it's so... onomaetopia-otic... lol, if that's a real word... lol, well... anyways... there' the rhythm too. PLUS!! THe RHYMING!! hehe... liked the abab thing that you had going and everything. Well, to summarize. Teh only thing that would've made this poem better was if it were... wait... DARN! There's nothing. lol. well... it's a compliment lol. So I just loved... Jus tloved it ... Keep it up!!