Wow. I can just feel the emotion behind this. I want to say I understand, but I've never gotten that far. I've never had to feel the contrasting emotions that you've had to go through, and for that, I'm sorry.

But this is beautiful, because while you're hurt, you're capable of seeing the situation as it is.

Bravo.

So relatable and beautiful!

I loved it

I really like this, I can relate. Good work.

Luvd it. 'Sick addiction' was a really cool use of words.

I totally know what you mean, guys are awful like that. I really liked your story and can relate to what you are saying. Just one thing I noticed about the grammar: "Your overbearing"; your should be you're or you are. Other than that excellent work; I really enjoyed it.

It could almost be a poem it's so rhythmic and flowing. It's beautiful and painful at the same time. It's fantastic.

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bravo

i kno exactly how u feel

*hugs* men, sweetie, are horrid creatures, but we already know that, don't we? Beautiful writing, great eneding line, lovem youm, Tkm!

I can relate to this completly! it's like you've written my emotions on a page. Iknow that sounds v self-obsessed, iknow other ppl must hav felt this. But...wow. It's really really good. x take a look at sum of my poems, they attempt 2 sum up this kind of stuff. x