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| Princess-anna57 2006-08-02 ch 1, | I like this a lot. You've written this really well. Keep writing! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| LoveSpishLaugh 2006-03-08 ch 1, | beautful poem. |
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-03-05 ch 1, | first of all, thanx alot for reviewing some of my work - i really take it to heart! i love this peice, its so slow moving and timid and dark. Your use of commas is very effective. keep up the good work :D |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-02-27 ch 1, | you expressed your emotions very well in this~ good work keep writing! |
| in theory 2006-02-27 ch 1, | I love the tone you take on, it's so open ended and limitless. |
| Cloudsinthesky 2006-02-26 ch 1, | I liked your poem. It was good. |
| Prisoner of Dreams 2006-02-26 ch 1, | Great job! "My eyes searching but lack the sight" - I really like that line! |