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Princess-anna57
2006-08-02
ch 1,
I like this a lot. You've written this really well. Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
LoveSpishLaugh
2006-03-08
ch 1,
beautful poem.
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean
2006-03-05
ch 1,
first of all, thanx alot for reviewing some of my work - i really take it to heart! i love this peice, its so slow moving and timid and dark. Your use of commas is very effective. keep up the good work :D
mizu no kokoro
2006-02-27
ch 1,
you expressed your emotions very well in this~ good work

keep writing!
in theory
2006-02-27
ch 1,
I love the tone you take on, it's so open ended and limitless.
Cloudsinthesky
2006-02-26
ch 1,
I liked your poem. It was good.
Prisoner of Dreams
2006-02-26
ch 1,
Great job! "My eyes searching but lack the sight" - I really like that line!
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