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Losing Tomorrow 2006-03-01 . chapter 1
Even if this poem might seem religious, the line "to escape this hell" would actually contradict that. It is somewhat ironic. And the words "heard" and "listen" help support the theme of "I've seen too much." This person seems like they would have been very helpful, perhaps a therapist to a friend. So it does seem like there was once happiness. The choice words are very good I might add.

And thank you for your reviews.
Miss Kai 2006-02-27 . chapter 1
Oh wow... I love this poem! It seriously makes you understand why someone would consider suicide. (Which I don't condone)

Anyway, I thought it was simply amazing. Great job!
la derniere chose 2006-02-26 . chapter 1
Wow this is great! I love the whole been there done that attitude that it conveyed.
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