Reviews for Unconventional In So Many Ways

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BasketCase101 2007-05-14 ch 6,	abuseplease you must update as soon as possible do you hear me! Or read me! plz i love it X3X3X3
blondiexoxo 2007-05-12 ch 6,	abusethis story is wierd but i like it alot. i hope u update soon i wanna know what happens
Angels of Sin 2007-02-11 ch 2,	abuseHey, I would really like to know a few more details. What kind of convertible. what year. what color. did she pick that car. How big is a rather large school.
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-06-17 ch 4,	abuseLOL, too freaking funny. I read it out loud (yes, I did...makes things more fun) and had a blast reading some of the quotes in thise. Mia/Christopher has a great voice. Keep writing! :)
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-06-15 ch 3,	abuseOkay, this is definitely interesting. I'm fascinated by this. It's kinda like a Freaky Friday type of thing. Love teen stories like this. Keep writing! :)
Chels Chels 2006-05-26 ch 5,	abuseThat...was a really weird chapter. o.O I shall have to poke you next time I see you for it. xD I will so catch up to you in chapters and awesome writing someday... ^^;
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-05-16 ch 2,	abuseDamn, I really don't know what to say. That ending is killer. Suspense! The characters seem a little 2-dimensional at this point, but it's still early. Who knows. Keep writing! :)
the.pink.life 2006-04-27 ch 1,	abuseHmm. This sounds like the beginning of a teen movie or something. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing. I like teen movies. Should be entertaining. Keep writing! :)
XxParalaixX 2006-04-23 ch 5,	abuseMe: Awe shucks!Alter Ego: Look! You've done it again! You've given her a big head!Me: GET OUT OF THE PICTURE! grins lopsidedly It's "got off on the wrong foot" not "got off on the wrong footing". Sorry if I am nit-picking but it's genetic (mum) and also, I spend half my time looking up random quotes on the internet (don't ask). In any case I love this story. keep going. u have my attention and that's not easy to get.-Much Wuv, Beau
XxParalaixX 2006-04-21 ch 4,	abuseYou make me laugh so much. If I didn't constantly fear my sister leaning over my shoulder and laughing at me for laughing out loud -I am very insecure...- then i would be laughing aloud right now instead of having hysterical giggling going on in my head -and distracting me intensely. I wonder what I would do if I became a boy? I guess I'd just go "this is so totally not happening", cover myself in clothes from head-to-foot, wear a headscarf and pretend nothing was wrong. One thing I know is that my mum would definately not laugh. She would scream, not believe me and call the police. I like the whole "kindy come-back" thing. That was cool. Btw, thanks for the mention in ur author note. I feel so luved! Alter Ego: There ya go pal! Look what you've done! She's gonna have a big head for ages! Thanks a lot, dude! huggles self
Chels Chels 2006-03-19 ch 3,	abuseJust so you know, I hate you for turning your back on me to write romance. T_T But...you're good at it. Shoot. I normally hate these stories and you have me wanting to read more. -_- I so hate you right now, Grape. XP
Annegelic 2006-03-06 ch 3,	abusehahahah she turned into a guy... lol that's hilarious. definitely not what i was expecting. so i suppose michel will be gay now?
XxParalaixX 2006-03-06 ch 3,	abuseOkay, I admit, I baulked a little when I read the whole "turned into a guy thing". I mean come on, does no one appreciate a little originality any more? Serious, I can't name at least three stories where guys turn into girls or girls turn into guys. I still love your realistic style of writing but still... I will keep reading this, to see where it goes. You have a great writing style, don't waste it on a subject that has already been explored 7 million times. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh but it's true. At least I'm complimenting your writing style (which really is great, trust me on that). My poor sister has never gotten a good review, she gets stuff like "don't give up your day job" seriously! I don't usually defend her but even though her stories/poems are exactly... well good, she could be told in a nicer way and be given some constructive criticism rather than "Omg, you suck!" If you wouldn't mind could you check out either my story "tribe of the north" or if you like more modern stories like yours "Under Arrest" (which I probably won't add onto for a while since I'm focusing on tribe of the north) or my sister: Jessica-jessie 's stories/poems? They're both still in progress my is quite a lot longer than hers. But if you have time could you review either/both of them? Btw, don't judge me by my sister. I know that sounds mean to her and this will sound really boast-ish but I've never gotten a bad review. It's okay if you can't but it would be appreciated. -Luv from Beau
XxParalaixX 2006-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI can't really say much on only this smalle chapter but here goes.:You have a good writing style and it sounds realistic but your chapters are very short. Most are usually about 3-5 pages in font times size 14.
Annegelic 2006-03-06 ch 1,	abuseUpdate

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