Oh I really like this one. It is very lovely and reminds me of the poem I just wrote (and posted) today. I'm going to add it to my favs!

This poem has a calm, serene tone. I love it; it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside! :D Great work!

"for time holds our hearts in her hands."

wie schön! how lovely!

--K

great poem. i love the line 'rays from the golden orb hovering in the sky' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~