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| rocky19 2007-03-15 ch 3,  | abuseyou should update |
| Zzub Yearlight 2006-11-07 ch 3, | abusethat whole brood of males are too overprotective of her. i mean they beat up some little boy just beacuse they were going to go out on a date. i really can't believe they did that. or that she called her teacher's daughter a **. i mean damn that was just priceless. great chapter. please update soon*beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg* |
| Zzub Yearlight 2006-11-07 ch 2, | abuseryan is such a horny little perv touchin on her thunder thighs like that and playing it of like it was nothing when her brother came in. and wasn't he so happy when he found out she'd never been kissed. love love love this chapter. please updaet soon*beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg beg* |
| Zzub Yearlight 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abusethis girl is so funny but i can't believe that she is actually cursing in a paper that her reacher assigned for her. and her teacher gave one hard as subject to write. love. ain't that some **. well she's doing a greatly hilirous job so far. |
| vivian 2006-10-06 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like this story alot I'm gonna keep an eye out for new chapters. I like your writing approach awesome job please post more |
| ally 2006-10-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseTHE BEST DAMN STORY EVER WRITTEN BY PERSONAL PERSPECTIVE! I WOULDNT DARE HAND THIS IN TO A TEACHER;) aw, ryan likes her... |
| genieve 2006-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abusehey, I really like this story and i'm so serious... if you don't finish this one I'll hunt you down and maime you! but really good job, but just one little suggestion I kno u like interracial stories and all but for a black girl to be in one doesn't mean she has to be completely unattracted to the men of her own race, but keep going and i'm serious about the maime-age if you don't finish! |
| Nocturnal silhouette 2006-10-02 ch 3, | abuseI absolutely love this. It's so free and well written. Great work! |
| mrskelley 2006-10-01 ch 3, | abuseI love this story...I like Karolyn..she is straightforward and sarcastic. Please update often! |
| democratfroggie 2006-03-15 ch 2, | abuseHAHA!! That's funny!! |
| chriatrine Daae 2006-03-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseis this fiction or non-fiction. LOVE your story. I feel like Karolyn, lol. Her and I would get along great. |
| democratfroggie 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI love it!! So true! Now on to the next chapter!! |
| Lovly Whispers 2006-03-09 ch 1, | abuseC-O-N-T-I-N-U-E! JEEZE PERSON!! |
| Alyssa 2006-02-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like where this is heading. continue it for sure! |
| running spring rain 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuse*BURN* Is Ms. Davidson modeled after a real person? If so... then OUCH. I would react the same way as you... And if not, then kudos for making the audience (yours truly) think so, hehe. Will he heroine be getting revenge on Ms. Davidson? Or other perverted guys that keep ogling her?? I'm confused... you mention a project. Does that mean she's turning this in? If so, it would be so interesting to see what Ms. Davidson's reaction would be...from the heroine's pov, or even HERS. Keep it UP! |