I love the whole music thing it's very cool

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anyway, the review for the other poem is it's interesting and all that, it's much better than some of my poems (and by some i mean most) but you could do better. Like the One Twilight's Reminiscence. That was great!

Now for this one. I can see what you're trying to say and all that. It's a better poem than the divorcee but i think you can dig up something better. Lol, i sound like i'm good in writing poems when i'm not. I'm a hypocrite XD