|Reviews for UNTITLED but still loved|
| FlashingBlades 12/21/11 . chapter 1
I love this! I'm adding it to my favorites! :)
| Mathael Ikritiriax 12/1/06 . chapter 1
Cool! Cool! I realy really liek it! hm I think it could be called "Sword dance" or something to that effect... but that kinda sounds a little cheesy... Can see why it's untitled. Bu it's really awesome.
| worldmage 5/7/06 . chapter 1
what a perfect poem...FOR ME TO PISS ON!
| Finding the Moon 3/4/06 . chapter 1
yes i do!, lol i like the word choice in this one and i can relate to this i like swords.
| Michael Aliester Smith 2/28/06 . chapter 1
Sheerly beautiful. Again, I feel this one. Very visceral and yet intellectual.
| Artemis Astralstar 2/27/06 . chapter 1
I like the journey you take the reader on: Dance, to Swordplay, to a subject, to Poetry.
Effective use of the word "boy" everysooften, and just enough not to ruin it. Constant register, and lovely imagery.
Nice poem! :)
| les petits bateaux 2/27/06 . chapter 1
Oh my. This was really really well done. Bravo to you. Everything was just perfect, from the gorgeous imagery to the powerful emotion of the mixture that is lust and love. Beautiful.
| Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2/27/06 . chapter 1
Hey...i really really liked this coz i can relate to this...i dunno wot else to say really, other than it is a great piece of writing.._ revierw me sumtiem_