Uncle John was right whne he said I'd like this one because I do! It does have a nice sort of calm flow to it, and I love how it doesn't all rhyhme but it states things instead - very defined and all. It's a great piece of writing as always! Take care! ))

Jess, Pretty cool. I liked the rythem and flow. I don't understand all the annalogies, but that's OK. Keep writing. I like it.