Ne,ne,,Krayd showed up in my story,,(well he didn't actually showed himself but he made contact)
Now I'm confused how he'll stay contacted with Kate while handling his own problem here...
I read the icky gooey stuff...it's really disturbing (can't imagine how the boys will feel) but I can also feel her pain...
Sry I havent review for a long long long time...but since I had nothing to do,,(aside from playing games) I read this agen and decided to ... do something about it...
Yea...when will you post the next one??

Yes...over the years. you have change as a writer. well in like one year and a few monthes. you're writing has become more darker and it is bothering me so and yet it will be so much easier writing heart gripping stories with dark themes and uh...screwed up characters that need people like me in thier lives. i feel sorry for fearell cause she seems to be suffering while some of the people are like enjoyin thier gift and stuff. please dont die. dont die. dont die.

yeah...fearell shud relly go to anger management and forget about christina.

the period thing. even though u said the period thing is subtle i tink its prety graphic and too much especially for sum of the boys in this area.

dat is...if any guys are reading. y not. y dont you all just tell it straight to thier face and show them how much it hurts! jslahdhjsalhjldkjsdfjfdskjd

the examiners are either: CUTE!! ^_^, WEIRD, URGH, UH... AND COOL i want a hairbal kay?

wat a depressing last sentence and it sets the mood.

richous,Curapica

yaya!! i'm done wid da fourth chapter!! haha.. i'm such a slow reader.. good thing i didn't go to skul today wid my leg like dis.. instead i can read ur story!! hehe.. well, who is james actually in realy life? yep, trinx is mentioned a lot in this chapter too.. she's naughty to the teacher! haha..no respect at all.. i guess that is her in real life too ? haha.. joking2.. :P.. so ya, a mysterious character at the end.. who might that be.. hmm...lol, i like the contrast between u and lea... about the flower part ^^

i've actually read this chapter before but i couldn't understand it well... so here i am again today reading my POV... haha.. wow, u seemed to make da battle scenes to be bloody and ...horrific.. haha.. i can imagine in my head the way trinx burned the 2 girls...and U! u were the one that was so evil...haha.. is like sasuke using sharingan.. :P..well, i'm off to continue the next chapter!! sorry for reading it so late...

PS: WHAT ABOUT STEVERN!? I DONT GET IT!!

aww mr stevern got a beetle! you knw, beetles are really cute dont u think so? (: I DONT GAG AT BEETLES. theyre adorable... -blush-hahaha thanks for giving me awesome hair. i gta love ya for that -swishes back some long black hair with purple streaks turning into blue then gold-

YYAY!! I GOT A BUNNY!! -glomps you and puckers her lips at the author- too bad it's evil ;_;

lol! the trashcan is alive? lol i wish we had those kinds of trashcans in school where you can just leave your trash or throw it wherever then this trashcan would catch it. how funny xDhay yay yay...i still remember eating cereal all the time in jakarta :p hey have you ever had a bird/eagle/falcon rest on your arm before?

OMFG. i have dalmations underwear! D: HOW DID YOU KNOW DAT?!!?1ONE they're my favorite too...;_;

i really dont get it. why is kurt and fearell drenched in blood? >< fearell bleeds a lot. ok the last part of the chapter was just scary. and disturbing. like woah. next chapter please

Hi! hehe finally got the time to review :p

i like this story a lot! it's cool and really interesting. i've always wanted to have powers like that so i really enjoy reading this ^_^

when will you reveal the villain? can't wait :)

k that's all for now. hurry and post the next chapter ok! ^_^

-Ricky

dont mean to sound sick, but the sum of the guys here sound hot. shinji's hot in a wimpy psychotic way. i love ur descriptions it effects me right here. that mysterious dude makes me want to punch him. i like how you describe each character's fashion. its interesting...and the person below me, trinx, freaks me out. the way she describes how she wants to smush/skuish and all dat organy way, a chill just went through me. Jaymes shud just stop it with the ego of him always effecting gurlz. jeez ego much. ps. i want ps3 and nintendo wii (prounouced we) it sounds sik for some reason...hm we. wat ru tinkin of?

man. whiny christina ** is anoying! i got annoyed reading her talking. you like, wrote is so well. like.>>dont you hate overly cute things? you just HAVE to kill /squish/torture it O_o

bwahaha jaymes mustve felt like a fool when he went up to kurt and mentioned some sort of voice ;D

WHY DIDNT YOU DO THE LEGS ON TABLE THING INSTEAD? t_t

Apparently Jaymes is a prety good looking boy since he is very..."GR"...yah?But he does seem cool...n...yeah...cool...The girls that fell,will they die? Or...Jaymes help them with his wind power and fly them up up and away back to the class??Anyway...I like this chapter...I'm waiting for the noext one!

eek!! sorry it took so long for me to read! wahahaa yeah im mentioned a lot! woo! hahah =PWHAT THE HELL WHY DID YOU MAKE ME DROWN IN GREEN GUNK? O_o?!? I should drown you in green gunk!! rawr you ! xD

who da hell is this "mysterious person" that fizzy can't seem to get off his mind? She reminds me of cho chang for some reason...I don't know. I just pictured flowy hair and yeah. wekeke.

jaymes has blonde hair yah? oh give a nickname for that dude who made us stop the fight! you know who im talkin about? something like, MR FART or something xD wekeke

“Hyssopus officinalis, Arternisia vulgaris, Juniperus, roots of the Cynara cardunculus, digitalis purpurea, the bark of the populus, and many others I do not recognize. An interesting combination…especially with the Cochlearia Oblongifolia” my my...how long did it take you to come up with those words? =P

HEY UPDATE SOON! im getting hooked onto this story!! ^^

Nyo! So cool!! ne,ne this "mysterious guy" thing, when will he be...y'know, revealed?Anyway...Lea seems okay...she's not 'that' pretty like what ur friend said.. besides, pretty girl is okay rite?So...what else should i say? keep on writting and...hurry up and write the 4th chapter. N can u show some other abilities that the other guys have??Hey, when will ur "world" come to my "world"? I hope in one of ur chapter like...i dunno, 9th or 10th maybe, u'll come over and meet my characters...kay?

I like the part wen you said about trinx's untamed hair, it sounded cool cause it does. ha ha. the spell dat only fearell and trinx can do, is there more? is it life threatening? oh no! please dont die! they're my favorite girls! krayd reminds me of krad! bwahahhaha. ok...ahem..as always ur descriptive, dats wat ive always like about ur stories and the clothes. ok its not fashion, its descriptions, u shud start ur own fashion line called description. i would buy it. dude, fiz is so in love with flawless lea, wen u described her it was like woah! cantik banget! u shud make a gay couple. for me? please!

ok bye uke,shiskebab

wait who was the person that you and me burned? I thought it was Rhyanna xD

ooh ooh...nice cliffhanger...hehehe...

LoL you made me so girly!! and I thought Jaymes was mine :p jk jkFizzy is Hafiz rite? You're BRO? you sure...? =PIs this all teh characters or will 43167241328401274 more come?

NEXT CHAPPIE NOW PLZ.