LOVE this poem! It's beautiful and well-written, and I have said myself that "I don't think I fit in your world." Shit happens. I hate it so bad sometimes. I love your comparisons and analogies, they're wonderful.

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i really like this poem, as well as they others.i love how you use alice in wonderlandwell done bravo :)keep it upp.s. thanx for u reveiw, ive got another version of it which ill put up soon.

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You reviewed my thing, so I'm reviewing , I actually really liked this, it's got nice imagery, a couple allusions, and an interesting moral, if I picked it out like I think I did... Nice work here.

Some extremely cool lines. Very disconnected in the most intriguing ways. Good job!

Favourite lines: "Maybe Irony has a point."". . .wait for the next hit and move on."

-corelania

oh, i love it! it has such a taste to it... very pretty & somehow reminds me of something... not sure what. great job though, keep writing!

Maybe irony has a point. I like that line. No clue why. Wonderful poem. Very raw.