Well! Where to begin?

Ah, yes. I finally got my new computer, so the first things I did after powering it up and(of course) installing MS Word, was to read all the chapters I've been missing, and may I be the first to say...

OH... MY... GOD! *grabs by shoulders and shakes* You didn't tell me you were a genius!

It's not perfect, but it's ingenius. The moment with the 'kiss' was BRILLIANT, and the inner banter has been amazing. I have some suggestions, which you can feel free to ignore in favor of your insane skillz. And... I just... *sigh* My brain won't produce enough adjectives... Magnifiscent, glorious, awesome... FANTASTIC!

Great chapter! I like the tension between Arias and Gaebriel!

First story that I've read in awhile where romance isn't its main genre... Anyways, your story is very well written and sounds professional. I can imagine picking up your story at some local bookstore. Engaging plot and interesting characters. Fascinating world you've thought up. Great job and update soon!

*blinks* I didn't review this? Thought I did. Anyways, nice chapter, especially with things heating up between Gaebriel and Annalisa.

NC

Well, I guess I'm not that surprised either at Nia's betrayal. I like how the chararcters are starting to develop.

A very captivating chapter, I say!

Awesome, I can't wair for more!

Oohh! This chapter had me on the edge of my seat! But I feel sorry for Gaebriel, sorta. But I have a feeling this will grow into a romance...

Awesome can't wiat for the next chapter, keep it comeing!

Wow! Possibly one of the most original stories that I've read! I look forward to reading more!

Heehee...that last line is the best. And Phil is one sneaky guy! Sneaky Sneaky!

Anyways, there were a few seperate words at the end that were smushed together, but other than that, it was awsome! I'm glad you updated and I can't wait for the next!

God bless!

W4J

Very cool, I really like this chapter. I can't wait to read more!

I simply love it! I've gone and done the unthinkable because of you... I brought back Lina and Collin. Well, the writing is simply magnificent and the way you begin to unfold the story inspiring.

Argh...I don't want it to end! This is so incredibly mysterious! And Nia! What a jerk! GOSH...Someone needs to teach her a lesson...Anyways, enough with the rambling...When are you going to update this? I hope you're still working on this because I can't wait for the next chapter!Waiting!..

W4J

Wow, this was really good...I only think there was one thing wrong, but since i don't remember it, it doesn't matter! Hehheh...It was really weird because I thought that Annalisa's mentor would be a guy...you're very tricksy! Hehheh, good job, and on to the next chapter!

W4J